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Today we wrote an explanation of Why an Elephant Would Make a Good Pet.

Title This will start with HOW... or WHY...

Why an Elephant Would Make a Good Pet

Introduction What are you going to explain?  How will you hook the reader in?

Did you know elephants’ hearts weigh up to 27kg?  That’s a lot of love to give!  That’s why we believe elephants would make a great pet.  If you’re not convinced...keep reading to find out more about why these beautiful creatures would be good for a pet.

Paragraph One What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)

The first reason to have an Elephant as a great pet is that they can help give you rides to work.  This means you won’t need to worry about leaving your keys in the car anymore, because you’ll have your Elephant to ride on.  You won’t need to use keys, you can use peanuts to start your Elephant! It also saves money for gas.  If you crash, you won’t have to worry about paying it off.

Paragraph Two What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)

Did you know Elephants don’t forget about you and how you treat them? If you treat them good then they will love you back.  If you give them love, and kindness, they will have something to love and protect. If you do that your pet elephant would love to live longer. Elephants are loving creatures so when you get older you have someone to turn to.  Your elephant will be there for as long as you live.

Paragraph Three What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)

The third reason why an elephant would make a great pet is because elephants are herbivores!  This means they don’t eat meat, but instead, they only eat plants.  Some of their favourite plants to eat include:  grass, fruits, leaves, shoots, and bark.  Imagine all the money you could save with a pet that is a herbivore!  You would not need to buy expensive pet meat products.  Your garden would also look beautiful too!

Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.

We have given you three fantastic reasons why an elephant would make a great pet.  We recommend you buy an elephant today and start your life long adventure with your special pet.